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« on: February 11, 2012, 04:46:18 PM »

My friends and I have been working on our own webcomic.  I just went through and did a bit of a site redesign and we are relaunching it.   I would like to share it with everyone and get some feedback.
Please check it out here, and let me know what you all think!! smile

www.zeropointcomic.net

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« Reply #1 on: February 11, 2012, 06:17:23 PM »

I just read through everything you have so far.  I like the art style and it stands out from the others I have read.  I'll have to keep reading to see where the story goes as so far,  it's all set up.  Not sure how I feel about knowing one of the character's motivations (from the bio page) as finding out as the others would might have been better, but could have been too cliched.

I like it.  Thank you for posting this. 

Also, the website looks really good.
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« Reply #2 on: February 11, 2012, 06:25:29 PM »

I'm not sure if it's my browsers (Firefox 10 or IE9) but the background makes some of the text under the comic kinda hard to read.  I attached a screen capture of how it looks.
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« Reply #3 on: February 11, 2012, 06:46:41 PM »

Looks interesting.

And tell your web designer to take the apostrophe out of "Bio's"
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« Reply #4 on: February 11, 2012, 06:52:22 PM »

Quote from: CeeKay on February 11, 2012, 06:25:29 PM

I'm not sure if it's my browsers (Firefox 10 or IE9) but the background makes some of the text under the comic kinda hard to read.  I attached a screen capture of how it looks.
Looks good so far and I like the styling but the website did this for me as well.

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« Reply #5 on: February 11, 2012, 08:34:58 PM »

Thanks for the kind words all.  We knew about the text and are working today on a new background to clean that up a bit.  Great point about the bios I will probably edit those up.
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« Reply #6 on: February 12, 2012, 01:19:21 AM »

Got a new background image in there and the site is much easier to read now.  Fixed the bios (not bio's) page, thanks for the catch on that.  We update on Fridays so if you want to keep reading check us out we'll be posting new pages then.   We'd love to go faster but we all work full time have families etc...   
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« Reply #7 on: February 13, 2012, 02:09:26 PM »

Your very first comic is shrunk down so much that it's hard to read the text in the narration boxes. Might I suggest finding a plugin that allows the comic itself to be shown big when clicked on? (similar to GT when looking at screenshots when you're in a review).
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